Task
Your friend Sasha is an art student. She wants to sketch at the V&A.
She’s written a first draft of an email and has asked you for help.
Look at Sasha’s email asking for permission. List all the things that are wrong.
To: v.partridge@vanda.co.uk From: sasha.price@myself.nl Subject: Hello! Hiya Mr Partridge! I love your museum and I really like the exhibition ‘Colours’ that is on at the moment. I saw your no sketching sign and I was really disappointed. I’m studying art at school and I was wondering if you could give me permission to sketch one of the paintings. It’d be really good for my final year project. If you could reply soon, that’d be good. Cheers! Sasha Price. |
To be able to rewrite this email here are some helpful tips:
Tips: How to write a formal email
Copy and paste the text of Sasha's email.
Rewrite the email and use no more than 100 words.
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