How to write an informal email.
Your informal email should count more or less 150 words.
I'm going to write an email to my friend, Nic. Now the first thing I have to do is think of a greeting. It's an informal email so I can start with a more casual greeting.
I could say:
I can use an exclamation point here to show that I'm excited to write to him but that's something I wouldn't do in a formal email. I can also use Nic's first name without a title. I could follow that with a friendly expression like:
Or if I'm responding to an email that he's sent me, I could say:
I'm going to divide my email into short paragraphs to make it easier to read. Now I can start the main body of my email. Here I have to think about why I'm sending the email. It could be to respond to some news that my friend has told me which could be happy or sad. For example:
Or to say congratulations or thank you. It could be to give Nic some news of my own. For example:
I could be writing to make an apology. For example:
Or it could be to send an invitation or respond to an invitation. For example:
Or it could be to make a request or ask for a favour.
There are different levels of politeness that you can use when making a request. The most polite way to ask is indirectly. For example:
Another polite way to ask is to write:
Then there's a polite but more direct way. For example:
The most direct way is to say:
Now how polite you want to be depends on who you're writing to and what you're asking for.
Sometimes you can finish up your email by making a suggestion or recommendation to your friend. For example:
Then you can finish off your email. There are lots of options here. For example:
Then you can sign off with:
They're some suggestions but what you write in an informal email is really up to you.
The email:
From: Nic
To: Peter
Subject: Birthday
Hey Nic,
How are you going?
Thanks for sending me the photos from your holiday. It looks like you had a great time! How're Leah and the kids? And what about your dog, Snoopy? He was just a puppy last time I saw him.
I'm sorry that I couldn't get to your birthday party. I would have loved to come but I was really busy at work and it was hard to get away. Thanks for the invitation though. Would it be possible for you to send me some photos from the party? I'd love to see how it all went.
I can't wait until you come to visit in March. Do you know how long you'll be staying? I'll try to think of some fun things to do.
See you soon.
All the best,
Peter